Dark's Angel 226 Report post Posted December 3, 2005 Dark Reminder of You The dark sky and stars Remind me of what we used to do We always had fun but That suddenly changed Why did you betray me? Why did you go to her? We were always happy Why did you leave me? The ocean splashes around my ankles and I look out and see a sea of endless black All I can be reminded of is you Why did you have to go? I loved you and you left me I'll be better of without you now You changed a lot when you went to her Everything is a dark reminder of you Everything. Remember Do I know you? I don't know who you are I don't remember you Quit calling my name I won't answer I see you staring at me Quit following me I don't remember you Lost in the fog Of my forgotten memories I don't remember you Have you forgottten me? Do you still love me? I finally femember you. I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CabbitGirl 4,018 Report post Posted December 3, 2005 those are cool == thats good. theres a sight you can put poems on. if youre interested i can give you the link Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark's Angel 226 Report post Posted December 3, 2005 Thanks. ^^ What one? I already have them Both posted on Deviant Art under Darks-Angel-90. I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark's Angel 226 Report post Posted December 6, 2005 I got bored again...I seem to either write or draw...here's another. When I get another scanner I share some of my fan art and my original art with you guys... Goodbye The sky darkens. Your presence fades. I always end up alone. Can't some one like me for me? Cant some one stay with me? Am I repulsive? Am I unworthy of frienship? Everyone that tries to get close to me, usually has an alterior motive. Why can't someone be my friend? Why can't someone not use me for their own gain? I'm through with being someone else's toy. You're never gonna see me again. You're never going to get the chance, to use me for you own personal gain. This is goodbye to all the pain and sadness. This is goodbye to you. Sayonara. I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark's Angel 226 Report post Posted January 19, 2006 I wrote this one tuesday. A Broken Heart The tears stream down my face As I look at your retreating form You say It can never work out That we can never be together Why did you lead me on? Why did you make me think you had feelings for me? I've come to accept your love of my twin and my one true best friend But your betrayal is something I cannot forgive. My feelings for you are slowly turning to Hatred. I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CabbitGirl 4,018 Report post Posted January 20, 2006 thats very good! (why i didnt see the other one before is beyond me but eh.) keep up the good work == btw. the site is www.allpoetry.com . some of mine are there under CabbitGirl. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Honeybee 29 Report post Posted March 4, 2006 Dark Reminder of You I'll be better of without you now You changed a lot when you went to her Everything is a dark reminder of you Everything. ^ it seemed like your poem started like the first line and clearly representing that then suddenly changed at the last moment to a different view. I would like to hear more on that view Remember i like this one it seems simple but i cant shake of the feeling that theres more... Goodbye i think you should spice this one up a bit more A Broken Heart ditto i like how you ask youself questions in your writting its kind of becoming your signature but i would like to see you branch out from that work as well http://img515.imageshack.us/my.php?image=siggy30hi.png Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
