Dark's Angel 226 Report post Posted April 10, 2006 My heart aches The bloody rain pours down It reflects what I’m feeling Tears of blood roll down my face and hit the ground. Clenching my eyes shut tight I try to shut out everything That wants to hurt me I feel empty I feel that something is missing There’s an emptiness deep within my soul My heart is crying My mind wishes it to stop The emptiness I feel consumes me It makes me want to lash out The tears of blood flow more freely I cry out in frustration as I Feel my heart clench in loneliness. And the tears flow faster Opening my eyes As the bloody rain stopped I looked around and I Saw that everything was covered in blood. The emptiness I felt grew And I knew something I was alone. 1 GundamFreakX reacted to this I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Neo 29 Report post Posted April 19, 2006 I like it Goutmister:The world is such a cold place... how am i supposed to live on my own and become someone? Neo: You have already become someone... someone with a heart colder than any one who you come across...just live your fullest and hate only those who oppose you..love who you can. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GundamFreakX 836 Report post Posted April 19, 2006 Very good, consuming. Fooly Cooly is when you do this with your hands... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark's Angel 226 Report post Posted April 19, 2006 Thanks guys. That means alot. I see the rain and it doesn't make me sad. My heart is a black hole and no one can save me from it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hell_Cat_18 1,359 Report post Posted April 23, 2006 Excelent poem, please keep up the good work okay. [sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
