Hell_Cat_18 1,359 Report post Posted June 26, 2006 ~Shine On~ Time cuts short all that is right Stealing all away from the light Red on white Forever staining the blood with light Keep me safe and tight Never let my broken wings take flight Everything is wrong with right Pay to see this broken bloody sight Stay here with me till dawn’s early light Promise you’ll stay and hold me tight Lost forever holding my own Keeping the light I tried so hard to hold Veins bleed with blood and gold Loneliness cuts to the bone I’m lost forever My heart was your’s for never Smile empty soul Shine on you crazy diamond Fly me to the moon and back No one will miss us They’ll never notice that were gone Together we’ll sing our broken song Laughter cruel and breaking fast I’m lost forever at last Although it’s the end I have no regrets My end is my release Finally I am at peace Cast into fire and brimstone for all eternity Gone forever from the holy trinity Father, son and holy spirit My judgment they gave This place will forever be my grave Pain and sorrow mix as one Regrets...I have but one... [sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Torreyjs 64 Report post Posted June 26, 2006 is that a poem or song? OR lyrical poetry? and btw its gangster (good) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hell_Cat_18 1,359 Report post Posted June 26, 2006 It's a song I wrote, but I also used some lyrics in there from other songs. They have special meaning to me, and to the person I wrote it for. Smile Empty Soul - The name of a rock band Shine On You Crazy Diamond - Song by Pink Flyod Fly Me To the Moon - Song by Frank Sinatra [sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CabbitGirl 4,018 Report post Posted June 26, 2006 it was very good hell cat =) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hell_Cat_18 1,359 Report post Posted June 27, 2006 Thanx Cabbit, I love how you always appreciate my work whether it's good or bad. [sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CabbitGirl 4,018 Report post Posted June 27, 2006 its always good though == keep up the good work Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hell_Cat_18 1,359 Report post Posted July 2, 2006 Thanx Cabbit I'll try [sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites