Hell_Cat_18 1,359 Report post Posted February 26, 2007 Press Play: It's raining again Do you hear it, can you see Or, are you blind and def as you are to me Days fly by, speeding past in their pause Following Murphy's Law and every clause Press play and hit the stop Hurry, while we're still on top Rent me a room on floor thirteen Fastforward to our senseless routine Drive by's and bullets to souls Shot from the barrel of an assasin's role Rewind in a fool's desperate hope To escape the nuse made of memories rope Music consoles and rips wounds anew Notes falling like blood from a sky so blue Press play and watch the story be told Of a love like fire that froze in the cold Rented rooms and lies filled with rues Senseless routines as an empty muse Thirteen floors and hit the stop Freeze in time the image of love on top Fastforward and skip the tragic end Of hearts to broken to ever mend A single tear to hit rewind Back to the begining, to that beautiful broken mind Press play...and watch as the days fly by... 1 COBRA reacted to this [sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CabbitGirl 4,018 Report post Posted February 26, 2007 wow. i dont even know what to say that was really really good HC! great job! ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hell_Cat_18 1,359 Report post Posted February 26, 2007 Thanx Cabbit, it's kinda funny I was working on editing my Myspace when this just popped into my head. *huggles* [sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CabbitGirl 4,018 Report post Posted February 28, 2007 hehe it always happens like that X'D just kinda pops in your head =3 you're very welcome == Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
falling-angel-111 736 Report post Posted February 28, 2007 wow that was like the best I'd read in a while. it never got boring and nothing sounded out of place it was just perfect. awesome work. 1 Hell_Cat_18 reacted to this "A penny for your thoughts but a dollar for your insides, or a fortune for your disaster." Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hell_Cat_18 1,359 Report post Posted February 28, 2007 Awww...thanx you two! *huggles* [sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
COBRA 378 Report post Posted March 5, 2007 very well done, i can see it, as one of those poems, read with every word said aloud, said froceful, and with meaning, fiting perfectly in to each verse. your poem got across it's message very well, and nothing of the poem seemed cliche, in term's of "rhyme's" which can be really difficult to use something else, then the normal, so other's can understand, rather then painting an image with words. like you did. very good! Dubirds on a Plane! "Don't Mess With The Nation, That Needs Medication!" - Christopher Titus - end of the world comedy tour Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mathias 426 Report post Posted March 28, 2007 I wish I could rewind and watch my kids growing up again. Their 3 and 1.5, and the remote seems like it's stuck on the fast forward button. I hope I can find the play button before I find myself crying on the rewind button too. Understand this lad, fate is a fickle lady. Work with the hand you're dealt and you may just be able to run your flag up the pole. Don't, and well, you may just find your mast cut down. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hell_Cat_18 1,359 Report post Posted March 28, 2007 Thanx guys, and I don't have children yet Mathias, but I know that my rents were saying the other day that they couldn't believe how fast I had grown up. While they were sad that I was no longer a child, they said they were so proud of the woman I had become. [sIGPIC]What's wrong, cat eat your tounge?[/sIGPIC] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
