I love your writting style, and the way you describe things without over cluttering of words. My only bone is I don't like origional characters. <3 Or mary sue, whatever they call those now a days.
It's been a while since I've read any fanfics, used to waste my days away with them. Even write some myself, but only yaoi. lol
It's refreshing to see fics about new serries, I'll have to catch up now. =)