Ladywriter

of course Kikyo aint gonna die/stay dead Kagome should shove an M80 up Inu's ass, fire that shit up and go home

Why Are You Shouting At Us!?

I mean that if every other line says something like... throbbing cock or slick wet cunt then ya might wanna revise it for a broader audience^_^

my bad, I thought I posted this here a while ago, but I didn't. Anyway.... the first 8 chapters are up. Its the sequel of the (unfinished) Sanji and Sher sequel yeah http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2539670/1/

sorry dude but yer killin me here If ya think its too raunchy I'll peek at it and give ya an honest opnion... not that my slobbish opnion would help or anything X'D you can always do the 'scene fade out' when things start to get too hot to handle

A sex scene doesnt have to be triple X Would their intamate relationship add depth to the story or create new conflicts for the characters to overcome? If so... fuck away X'D

check it over for run on sentances, overuse of commas and basic structure. I cant be sure if you want to keep the characters in character, but if thats what you're gong for ...it's out of character for Sessy to be that close with any group other then his own (and he's standoffish w/ them). He may follow but he wouldnt join up and hang out with them and he wouldnt say that he needed help from anyone to kill Naruku once and for all.

sadly thats true. its just another fucked up point to the plot and the way the story is going. If Inu wants Kikyo so much then Kagome should just be like "well see ya you dont need my help no more" and split rather then stick around and put up w/ Inu's crap. Kagome is little more then Inu's doormat

curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought him back. Write out the scene both ways and see which one seems to flow with the story better

After Bankotsu died, it just went lame. He was definatly the best advisary Inuyasha ever had. Naraku has this great new body then why aint he got Koga's shards yet? Cuz hes a lame-o too. They have this uber powerful bad guy and he dont do shit. Kagura is just annoying now. Inuyasha is an asshole. he's being a total fucktard about Kikyo and Kagome's dumb ass just puts up with it. The villans aren't being used very efficantly and the two main characters (Inu and Kagome) are acting like idiots and not really in character...

eh... I don't think just the one nuk will do that much damage to the fleet. It could destroy or disable Cloud 9 maybe even damage ships close to it. The ships in the fleet gotta be pretty tuff to hold up as long as they have while running from and fighting with the cylons. I think the nuk is more of a terrorist threat to the colonists ie human life as apposed to something to damage the fleet. If the cylon supporters are all like 'yo bitches we hid a nuk in the fleet, aint tellin ya where and we're gonna blow it and kill a bunch of colonists unless you listen to/give in to our demands' in the intrest of preserving lives (that number is everything to her) Laura will have to at least hear the cylon supporters out (I think she will. She's tuff but fair) while on the down low Adama and the marines look for the nuk

even if they get to earth, they'll still be dicked if they don't do something about the cylon threat. they will have to A. find a way to permenantly hide from the cylons. Very doubtful. B. destroy all human hating cylons. That would be pretty tuff since we don't really know how many cylons there really are out there C. make some kind of agreement with the cylons. Now that they know a mix of cylon and human blood is a damn powerful cure-all for human disease the humans may decide that enilating all cylons would be too hasty of a move. I think Baltar is totaly up to something sketchy. I can see him sideing with and becoming an advocate for the cylons (at least the human models). Even if he does go pro cylon, he still has to deal with Laura and the old man and neither of them are just gonna roll over and do what Gaius wants. The cylons are continuing to evolve. Sleeper cylons like Sharron live as humans with the full spectrum of human emotions. Even knowing what she is Sharron still loves Helo. Gaius Helo and the chief are living proof that a cylon/human relationship can be no different then a human/human relationship. They know where to go look for earth, but that doesnt mean they're gonna go there tomorrow. They can't risk leading cylons bent on destroying them to the last sanctuary of mankind.

yeah I gotta do Neji and Shikamaru. Shikamaru has already been spoken for, I promised to make one for Link 2 weeks ago my bad. I'd like for each character to have their own sig. Shikamaru Neji and Lee will be the next to get done

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Did anyone else think that that was hillarious 'crap' X'D Shino: You'll just have to endure it now. I guess he don't like to be bugged while hes on the toilet X'D very character good and bad all standing in line for the bathroom X'D pretty base humor but it had me cracking up. You would think that w/ all the 9 tails power Naruto would have better control of himself

Kakashi said something like after he uses it 4 times a day he gets tired and he aint got no extra sealed chakra He's just that bas ass yo! A big part of chidori is the speed you're moving at when you hit the target. They talked about it in one of the eps, maybe one of the Itachi eps I can't remember exactly

Koga. I'm not into blondes anymore X'D you know I'm kidding right Yondaime?!

well.... technically speaking Naruto has the same amount of chakra as any other normal human being, the 9 tails chakra is capeable of "Leaking out" like healing his body fast, and when it's a life or death or wicked ass serious situation Naruto can collect the rent and borrow the kuuybi's chakra. Easy enuff to tell apart, Naruto/human=blue, 9tails evil monster= redish orange Rasengan vs Chidori I have to say Rasengan doesn't require as much chakra because once you set the spiral into motion it's own momentum can keep it going. Laws of physics trying to be observed here I guess Chidori however requires you feed it and fuel it with chakra, thus Sasuke only has enough chakra to be able to create and maintain 2 a day. sound 'bout right?

For once I can actually say "I didn't see that one coming" and mean it! I was fairly prepared to see her written off; to think Gaius actualy saved her rather then ascending to the office of prez. Wow So now that she's okay all better now, looks like Laura is gonna have her hands full dealing with Gaius. He did give the cylon sympathisers the bomb the yutz, but even that bomb could only take out one- two on the outside- ships in the fleet. Wouldn't it have been more tacticaly adventageous to leave the nuk on Galactica, take out BSG and take over The Pegasus?

It was starting to drive me a little crazy, Naruto and his damn dattebayo at the end of every other sentance. I've listeded to a lot of J diolouge and that was a new one to me. The english version of Naruto has him saying "belive it!" all the time so I was like Anyway I went looking to figure it out. Pretty much it's just another way to end a sentance to emphasise what the speaker is saying. It's makes the sentance more agressive. The speaker is making sure they're being heard. Their strong will is coming through. Naruto uses this expression a lot because he has always been starved for attention and acknowledgement. It also expresses how strongly he feels about what he's saying. Naruto dont take back his words. That's his way of the ninja

It takes place between bringing Tsunade back to Konoha and the Tea country filler arc. Team 7 is assigned to protect an actress who turns out to be the real princess of snow country.

So, who (or what) is your favorite summon? Temari's summon is sweeeet I just love her anyway My favorite has to be Pakkun though. How can you not love that face? X'D

I have to say it's a clue too. I think some part of the 4th was sealed with the kuuybi inside of Naruto. The jutsu/seal trapped the kuuybi inside of Naruto and some part of the 4th helps to keep the inner beast in check. The 4th would be able to read higher level scrolls and could somehow remember Rasengan too.

check the fanfiction.net account thread if your curiosity is getting to ya

No, not really. He is the Lord of the territory just keeping things cool in his domaine like he did in the movies.