Honeybee

it's an anime wrapped in humor, it's also kind of inspiring too

i'm not sure there's a movie based off of it, though i do think i remeber reading a refrence to it being either an anime or a movie in Japan

i think the anime is extremely awesome, though it could get kind of confusing if you watch it nonstop, all the lessons and meanings started to get blurred for me after a while, still i love the characters, also i found the conflicts fairly relative, and not too over the top. I'm concerned over whether there song for i believe the second intro was really "punk" (I wanna need your love...I'm like a broken rose) I think both Nana are interesting, and i like them together

i dunno, i think most of there show listings are pg, and i think they favor a certain animation style, but i suppose you can't have shows that would be too intense on a tv channel. It would be interesting if they had tribut months, to play certain movies, still I like the idea of being able to have a dedicated anime channel

gotta say them some nice sigs

seeing is still feeling

try writting what you see insted of what you know as the ideal image of alone

what do you see when you hear the word alone? do you see a moon? do you see a person wondering the same thing as you? do you see darkness? do you see light? I see mist what do you see?

Dark Reminder of You I'll be better of without you now You changed a lot when you went to her Everything is a dark reminder of you Everything. ^ it seemed like your poem started like the first line and clearly representing that then suddenly changed at the last moment to a different view. I would like to hear more on that view Remember i like this one it seems simple but i cant shake of the feeling that theres more... Goodbye i think you should spice this one up a bit more A Broken Heart ditto i like how you ask youself questions in your writting its kind of becoming your signature but i would like to see you branch out from that work as well

this one is similar to you other one but carries in a different direction i think you used die to much in the begining and i was kind of seeing a different ending you shouldn't use that many as' it takes away from the effect this is my favorite line i can see it, and i think i represents your poem well

please do ^ ^ i look forward to hearing them

My mind is urging me to go somewhere ^ that was the strongest line in your first poem it drives completly mad, because its such a burning notion that you cant regect that can run you up the wall. because while you wish for it to leave it will stay binding you almost crushing you driving you into a panic because you can not answer it it has to die away and it devors you slowly do you really live near a forest of some sort that you wander in?

nice ending i kind of wanted more discription but in the same time not because while the imagery was jumbled in my mind one of the many messages i found in that poem was clear and cold

...well we both have very different views on the rain i think its almost comforting you think of it as depressing comments dont look if you dont want:

i really like the opening theme song sonic! *hum hum hum!*

ditto im thrilled for the next one!

critze me all you want ^ ^ i need to handle it and learn from it to pursue better writting thanks cabbit ^ ^ i will

sry for double posting but i came up with another one The boy's violin no one said a sound and no one gathered round' to the boy with the violin playing for his chance at din People walked on by And no one stoped to try to just say hello or say i have to go cause~ no one said a sound to the melodies around to the boy with the melodies who always played off key no one said a sound to the sweet little kin "Thats some melody but "Your playing off key" and no one said a sound and no foot left the ground the boy just looked at me his emotion hard to see and he said to me "no one said a sound and yet no one gathered round and i just wanted to see if they wanted me or sound i keep" and then he played a sound and people gathered round a sweet melody never off a key and it seemed to me that the best sound ever heard in that town was not the sweet melody but the result you see the clapping going round till you couldnt hear a sound acting in harmony with the boys sweet melody and the beautiful harmony was enough to go round

^ lol

a little thing i wrote for english... When you asked about my dreams for this world I see: Shades of gray, green earth, blue birds, hands shaking, and foxes racing through the summer forest. No guns, no anger, people playing, trains on their tracks clean as a whistle, and culture with amazement. People throwing their heads back, in the middle of a crowd, laughing wrinkling their starch stiff suits. When you asked me about my dreams for my neighbors and brothers I see: People of uniform but still able to tell everyone apart, smiles bold, laughter and play. A ball rolls into a man’s foot. He picks it up, and hands it to the girl in a pink and yellow flower dress with a kind smile. When you asked me for my dreams I see: I see myself standing tall, consoling, shattering and putting the pieces back together, and simplicity. Tap dancing the stage away and finding no one in the audience, a cheesy smile, a pat on the head. A welcome greeting, being the best, running the farthest climbing the hardest, winning the race. Experiencing everything, staring at the stars, Swimming upstream, painting my world in words, writing my book that becomes famous. Having people saying “I love you” “thank you”, walking the streets I once knew, having a whole of carton of ice cream at three am. Finding what I have searched for my whole life, being able to fail and laugh about it, sing in front of an audience and get applause, having the nerve to kiss my love without thinking. But when you get down to it dreaming and seeing aren’t always enough to make it happen. So for my last dream I want to put, able to grasp the complexity of my dreams and still able to accomplish them. Honeybee~

aww cabbit almost was killed { hope your next installment comes in soon ^ ^ ^ ditto

umm i was just wondering if you pmed mine because my comp was acting funky for a while and i might not have gotten it

Okay MOB CEASE FOR NOW AND SURROUND THE PARIMITER (sp?) IF TRIES TO ESCAPE WILL HUNT HIM DOWN!!! *patiently waits while playing chinesse checkers*

lol seems like the mob is almost done now will A-G please go to the pitchfork secion H-L to the bomb section M-U to the mace/pepper spray section V-Z to the pom pom section (rally the troops up !) WE ATTACK SOON

ive got the mob but the patience uhhhhhhhhhh...